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  Down Wind, Down River: New and Selected Poems
by William Witherup
Reviwed by Fred Whitehead
 
   
 
       
       

Down Wind, Down River: New and Selected Poems by William Witherup . 2000. 178pp. Paperback, $16.95. West End Press, P. O. Box 27334, Albuquerque, NM 87125.

 

I often think with envy of the poets of 18th century England, writing in a country that was small enough everyone knew everyone else.  They might not all have been friends—indeed, some of their quarrels were legendary, but to a considerable extent, they recognized each other as citizens of the Republic of Letters.

In contrast, it is possible to pass most of one’s literary life in these United States without even being aware stellar talents exist among us.  Curiously, the fashion for creative writing programs hasn’t really helped, as most academics write only for themselves, and for their professorial colleagues.  “Poetry,” Hart Crane lamented, “is about to become all the rage in America, and it’s a dead bore to anticipate.”  He solved his own problem with this by jumping overboard into the Gulf of Mexico

If it hadn’t been for David and Pat Brodsky of Kansas City, I would never have heard of Bill Witherup.  A few years ago they introduced me to his work; I was pleased to publish a short appreciation by Pat in my late newsletter, People’s Culture.  Then Bill connected up with John Crawford, resulting in this retrospective volume.  For various unavoidable reasons, it has taken five long years for me to be able to write a proper essay on this important book.  Shelley said poets are “unacknowledged legislators of the world.”  In any real Republic of Letters on this continent, Bill Witherup would be a Senator.

This is a man who has literally paid his dues, as a laborer, in several trades and trade unions.  He has a special affinity, it appears, for trees, as he is built like an oak.  But like many such, he’s has his share of hard traveling—stupid bosses, aches and injuries, the hidden pain and stress of manual toil.  Here’s “Working Class Haiku”:

                        Scorpion shadow
                        Of the backhoe falls
                        On a ditch deep as my grave.

Then a coda: 

                        I was tripping out on the feathery
                        patterns I was making in the sand
                        with my square edge shovel when
                        the super appeared at the ditch
                        bank and said: “Jesus Christ, Witherup,
                        we’re not making a work of art here!
                        Hurry it up, man!”

Who, having done such work and under such a master, has not resented the mentality he enforces in his slaves, what Hamlet calls “the spurns that patient merit of th’ unworthy takes”? 

Witherup is haunted by death—graves, ditches, burial.  These poems are filled with nightmares: “My mattress floats in an ocean of newspapers/through the eternal night of the fifty states.”  Reading his work, I am convinced all over again that true poetry must plumb such depths, or be rightly forgotten.

The nightmares began for him in the days of his youth in the dusty nuclear towns around the Hanford plant in rural Washington State, where his father worked.  I wonder who of us, growing up in the Fifties, either in the U.S. or in Russia, didn’t fear that at any moment, we could all be converted into ash?  How did that hideous, omnipresent possibility infect our minds, and sew our bodies with Strontium?  There are poems here that express the subtle, secret poisons pulsing within.  On his own father dying: “He hums with prostate cancer./Carried plutonium home in his underwear,/Ashes of Trinity, ashes of Nagasaki.”   Those responsible are named: “And there are demons on the overpasses/In labcoats and dark goggles, checking/Dosimeters for permissible radiation levels.”  The “suits” themselves will regret their insane negligence: “They will pound their chests,/Grief-stricken; ask themselves/Why they did not read the poets?” 

By the Sixties, Witherup was in on the “scene” in Santa Fe and San Francisco, and his poems of that era ably evoke the free-wheeling spirit of the times.  But he was already deeply in touch with the real world, with nature with a capital N.  Indeed, the list of animals and insects and plants given poems here reads like a biological catalog of Western America: “His cabin is damp—/March storms battered the porthole,/And a school of sow bugs poured in.”  Wasps, hornets, an enormous moth, and water striders.  And birds.  From “On a Dead Swallow,” this sharp line: “your tail two columns of blue smoke.”  I’m particularly taken with the poet’s fondness for crows.  “I love crows,” he writes.  “If I met one human size/I would invite him into my living room.”

We are, Witherup perceives, unquestionably a part of nature, yet why are we so often at war with nature?  How has the Unnatural become Natural?  Chemicals to green and brighten suburban lawns are deadly, and “sear the dearest freshness/Deep down things.”  Americans “hide their suffering/hide their death” in prisons, mental hospitals and foreign wars

Other sections of the book deal with prisons in some detail.  An entire series is devoted to Soledad, where the African-American prisoner George Jackson was murdered by guards.  Our factories are like prisons too; in a cannery

                        The boss’s old sea turtle face
                        rises from deep water.
                        We are about to get orders
                        to murder five million squid
                        for the gourmet tables
                        of the Greek dictator. 

From such dismal circumstances, what else could help but some kind of rough solidarity, “unless you are one of those academic poets/Who has never roughened his paws with labor.” 

To save his sanity, Witherup fixates on ritual objects such as a Zuni fetish.  He is thoroughly acquainted with the Chinese masters of poetry, who faced the emperors of their own times, and sought solace in stark landscapes.  He invents his own rituals, as in “For a Still-Born Niece”:

                         A thousand miles from you, sister,
                        I plunge my wrists in the ocean
                        until they are braceleted with salt.
                        Then I raise them to the sun
                        as beacons for the child’s soul. 

Though he often experiences near-fatal submersion, Witherup salutes Life, contradicting Wagner’s absurd claim that love is fused with Death.  This is, indeed, “a journey that should be made.”  Ave atque vale, Senator Witherup! 

 

       
       
       
 
   
     
 
 
       
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